This Sunday’s Six are another six sentences from my free read “Gia’s Free Spirit”. In last Sunday’s Six, Gia and her girlfriend Sara were enjoying each other after the first days of class for this semester. However, things have gone south since then. Now, Gia finds herself in her writing professors office where things have escalated between them to the point of no turning back.
Slowly, she unbuttons his shirt and grazes her fingernails down his slight muscular chest to his nipples. He edges closer to her as they continue to kiss and with a twist to his nipple he moves from kissing her mouth to her neck.
He savors her taste, not wanting to miss an inch of skin or forget a moment. She wants to enjoy this attention for a little while longer. It’s the sweet apprehension about not wanting to make a wrong move when you’re with someone new. A subtle balance of power that gets lost when you find out what your partner likes and so far Alex hasn’t made a wrong move.
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May 1st, 2012 at 10:22 am
That was great…I love the feeling you put in it. First times are always sweet and nerve racking too.
April 30th, 2012 at 12:15 pm
Great description of a tender, cautious moment!
April 30th, 2012 at 9:35 pm
Thanks, Gemma!
April 29th, 2012 at 12:23 pm
This is the defining sentence of this snippet to me. This moment is what so many new couples live for and you’ve captured it in words wonderfully.
April 29th, 2012 at 9:42 am
sweet apprehension, nice
you’ve captured the moment when you’ve taken a step and now you need to take another, nicely done